This syllabus represents the contract of terms between the student and the dance department instructor of this course. The student is responsible for all information contained in this document. Information contained in this syllabus is subject to change and students will be notified of any changes to the terms of this document as soon as possible.

 

Modern Dance Technique II
(dance-210/211)
Fall 2012

Dance Department
St. Olaf College

Credit: 210 = .50; 211 = .25

Schedule: MW 2:00-3:30pm in DC Studio 2

Faculty: Anthony Roberts

Phone: 507-786-3622

Email: awr

Office: DC 327 / Hours: T: 1-2pm or by appointment

Class Alias: dance-210a/211a

 

 

RATIONALE: Training in modern dance technique accentuates and deepens awareness of the body, while acknowledging and exploring established connections between the physical, cognitive, and emotional aspects of the individual. Modern dance technique builds physical, aesthetic and conceptual skills important to the development of a proficient contemporary dancer.

 

COURSE DESCRIPTION: Modern Dance Technique II is geared toward students with previous modern dance training and/or substantive training in another genre of dance. You should obtain dance faculty approval prior to enrolling in this course. Throughout this class, you will explore at an intermediate level a range of movement vocabulary, body awareness, and creative and improvisational processes. Class generally begins with creative movement experiences and/or combinations designed to warm up and engage the body, mind, and emotion and progresses to locomotor movement patterns that incorporate conceptual elements of dance and build physical, rhythmic, spatial, and dynamic skills. You will also explore the creation and performance of movement material through guided movement scores and improvisational experiences. Live musicians accompany this course.


COURSE OBJECTIVE: To develop your physical intelligence by providing the opportunity to learn, create, and perform movement material as filtered through the lens of an eclectic modern dance point of view at the intermediate level.

The following elements will addressed in support of your learning.

1.     Technical Skills: The ability to execute movement material with due consideration of anatomic and artistic principles.

2.     Dance Conditioning: Muscular Strength & Endurance / Flexibility & Range of Motion / Neuromuscular Coordination / Dynamic Alignment

3.     Movement Clarity and Kinesthetic Sense of Fundamental Dance Elements (the body, in space and time, with energy)

4.     Movement Sequencing: The ability to learn and perform new movement material.

5.     Creative Problem Solving: Utilizing movement and the elements of dance as a means to find solutions to questions or problems posed.

6.     Analysis, Discussion & Synthesis: The ability to perceive and discern between effective and ineffective examples of course objectives in yourself and your peers, and synthesize your findings into your own dancing.

7.     Modern Dance Language: Establish a functional language for modern dance description and analysis.

8.     Historical Perspective: A general understanding of the roots and pioneers of American Modern Dance.

 

COURSE METHOD: Kinesthetic Learning and Physical Practice – The material for this course is primarily learned and experienced through your physically active participation during each class period and out of class physical practice and study.


COURSE REQUIREMENTS:

1.     Kinesthetic Learning: You are expected to work diligently during class, alone and in groups, to physically explore, create, learn, analyze, and improve your ability with the course material (movement, vocabulary, your own creative solo and group phrases, etc.). You are also expected to commit an optimum amount of time outside of class toward review, practice, and further development of course material in order to attain your highest potential and desired ability in this course.

a.     Engage in individual and collaborative movement activities focused on discovery, creative problem solving, and patient and persistent refinement.

b.     Learn and perform movement material that is created and demonstrated by the instructor, your peers, and yourself as filtered through an eclectic modern dance point of view.

c.     Create, perform, and teach movement material developed through loosely and highly structured improvisational scores.

d.     Receive and process critical feedback from the instructor and your peers.

e.     Perceive, assess and provide critical feedback on the work of your peers.

f.      Reflect upon your individual progress through sensory and video observation and class discussions.

g.     See, consider, and discuss live and videotaped modern dance performances and documentaries.

2.     Modern Dance Learning Community (MDLC ) Participation: The primary purpose and goal of the MDLC is to elevate student learning and achievement in this movement intensive dance class, by providing an efficient, sustained, and structured use of out of class engagement in a community setting.

a.     At the beginning of the term, the class will divide into smaller groups of students to form modern dance learning communities. These learning communities will meet outside of class to work to further develop and deepen your mastery of course material through physical practice of class activities.

b.     Each learning community group (thus, each student enrolled in this class) will commit to meet a minimum of 30 minutes, 2 times each week for the duration of the term (1 hour each week outside of class).

c.     Each modern dance learning community session will be staffed by a Modern Dance Technique TA (teaching assistant) to provide assistance to each learning community group during their sessions.

d.     Attendance at the learning community sessions is required and attendance will be taken.

e.     Active participation in the modern dance learning communities will result in a greater degree of student learning, accomplishment, and success in this course.

f.      Failure to participate in the modern dance learning communities will result in failure to pass this course.

 

3.     Video Days: Multiple times throughout the term, you will be videoed while performing movement material you have learned and created in relation to this class. The videos will serve as a visual record of your growth and process in this course.

 

4.     Modern Dance Examination: You will take a written examination on the modern dance language, movement concepts, and historical information introduced and/or used in relation to this course. You are expected to maintain a glossary of the language (vocabulary) that will be included in the examination for this course.

 

5.     Modern Dance Performance Attendance: As a member of this class, you are required to attend a minimum of one fully produced modern dance concert by a professional (preferred) or college dance company. Neither a ballet, play, musical, an informal showing, nor 'works in progress' will count toward this requirement. If you are unsure if a potential dance concert fulfills this requirement, ask me. You are encouraged to attend as many dance events as possible. There will be a listing of dance performances in the Twin Cities on the Dance Department website soon.

 

6.     (Dance-210 / .50 credit only): To fulfill the additional .25 credit for this course, you are required to complete the following additional assignment activities.

a.     Independent Dance Technique Project (only for those students registered for Dance-210 / .50 credit): You are expected to design and engage in a research activity in consultation with me. The specific objective of the research activity is to deepen and broaden your individual process, inquiry and exploration of dance technique in the context of this course. You are required to schedule 2 separate meetings with me during the term to discuss your dance technique project. Your research will culminate in a multi-media class presentation. More information will be provided in a separate document.

b.     Modern Dance Performance Concrete/Visual Poetry 'Impressions' Activity: Within one week after the date of the modern dance performance you attend, you will submit your impressions of the dance performance in the form of a visual or concrete poem. More information will be provided in a separate document.

 

 

THERE WILL BE NO FINAL EXAMINATION.

 

 

COURSE GUIDELINES / POLICIES:

 

Open Door Policy

You may make an appointment with me at anytime during the semester. Email is the most efficient method for making an appointment, but feel free to call my office (3622) or catch me sometime between classes.

 

Class Etiquette

1.     Studio Rules:

a.     Please remove your shoes before entering the dance studio and leave them outside the studio. No street shoes in the dance studios.

b.     No food or drink other than water (recommended) in a closable, non-glass container.

c.     No chewing gum or smoking allowed in the studio.

d.     All electronic devices need to be left outside the dance studio or turned off prior to entering class.

2.     Dress Code:

a.     You will be dancing in bare feet.

b.     Dance clothes for class should be comfortable without hiding or distorting the lines of the body. Close fitting dance/athletic wear or similar is best. Jeans and similar kinds of pants are not acceptable. Excessively baggy clothing is not acceptable. Gentlemen should consider purchasing a dance belt (artistic athletic supporter). Let me know if you have questions.

c.     You may consider purchasing kneepads to reduce the potential for irritation when performing movement combinations with floor work.

d.     Hair needs to be pulled back from the face and neck.

e.     No hats, long earrings or large and/or noisy jewelry, please.

3.     Conduct: You are expected to:

a.     Be consistent, self-motivated, and committed to your work.

b.     Be courteous and respectful of the people with whom you are working.

c.     Have a positive mental attitude.

d.     Be well prepared for and focused on all tasks you are expected to perform.

e.     Pay close attention to details and directions (guidance for enhancing your dancing).

f.      Understand that general directions and feedback for the class, while not given to you specifically, may still pertain to you as a member of the class.

g.     Take constructive criticism and apply it to your work without allowing your personal feelings to interfere with the process.

h.     Ask questions of the instructor. Beyond this, students should not engage in unnecessary conversation and should give the instructor and class material their full attention at all times.

i.      Take responsibility to help create a positive atmosphere in the studio classroom.

j.      Stay engaged. Sitting between combinations is considered poor etiquette as well as being physically detrimental.

4.     Writing Materials:
      Have writing materials handy, as you will occasionally need them.

5.     Injuries:

      Due to the experiential and participatory nature of dance classes, it is important that you be       able to physically participate in all class periods. If you have an injury that impedes or prevents       you from participating fully in a class, please inform me at the beginning of the class period.

6.     Tactile Teaching:
      Tactile (of, having or perceived by the sense of touch) teaching involves hands on       correction by the instructor, and is a valuable teaching aide in assisting the student in       understanding aspects of proper alignment, placement and movement concepts during class. If you       are uncomfortable with this aspect of the technique class, please let me know immediately.

 

Absence Policy

1.     You are expected to be present, on time, appropriately dressed, able and ready to move for every class period. You are expected to plan your curricular, co-curricular, and personal schedule of activities to accommodate your full participation in each class period.

2.     Please notify me in advance in the event of an absence, if possible.

3.     If absent, you are expected to meet with classmates to learn and/or review movement and other class material missed as a result of your absence.

4.     You are allowed one absence without effect. Every absence after that lowers your Demonstrated Quality of Effort grade by one grade level (from A to A-, etc.).

5.     Second or third absences must be made up in other dance technique classes. See Make-up Class Policy / Options below for more information.

6.     Failing to make up absences beyond the first will result in a grade of ÔFÕ (Failure) for this course. No other make-ups are allowed.

7.     Accruing a fourth absence at any point during the term will result in an automatic ÔFÕ (Failure) for the course.

8.     If a situation arises in which you must miss class for more than 2 consecutive days, you must immediately inform me so that appropriate accommodation may be made. Such accommodation may include a referral to the Dean of Students and will be made on a case-by-case basis, with consideration given to your health, well-being, academic integrity and the academic integrity of the Dance program and the College.

9.     If you are not able to participate during a class period due to illness or injury, but you are well enough to sit and watch class, you can avoid an absence by observing the class and submitting an observation paper. See Activities > Assignments on Moodle for more information on this assignment.

10.  Exceptions to the Absence Policy:

a.     If you must miss class for a College sanctioned event, you will be allowed one additional absence without effect, provided that official notification (email or signed document from faculty/administrative staff supervising the event) is sent to me prior to the day of the class being missed.

b.     Job Interviews, non-emergency medical appointments, meetings with advisors and the like are not valid exceptions to the absence policy.


Tardy Policy

1.     You are expected to be present, on time, appropriately dressed, and ready to move for every class period. If you are not present when roll is called you will be marked tardy. If you are late for class 3 times, you will receive 1 absence (6 times late = 2 absences, etc.). If you arrive late for a class period, please inform me at the end of class, so I can mark you as 'present'.

2.     If you are 10 minutes late to class, you will not be allowed to participate, but must observe class and complete the corresponding observation paper (see Observing Class Policy below). This is in consideration of the your health, injury prevention, and with respect for your peers in this class. If you must leave class early, please inform me before class begins. You will receive either a tardy or an absence, depending upon how much class is missed. If you choose to leave class without informing me, you will receive an absence for the class.

 

Make-up Class Policy

1.     Second or third absences must be made up in other movement intensive dance classes.
You must make-up a missed class by participating in or observing any St. Olaf Dance Department movement intensive dance class. Consult the class and lab for a schedule of appropriate classes.

2.     You need to obtain the permission of the instructor of the make-up class in advance to make sure you may participate in or observe the class on the day you wish to attend.

3.     You need to fill out the Make-Up form located near the Companydance bulletin board in the hallway between studios 2 & 3, and obtain the signature of the instructor of the make-up class. Let me know if you have difficulty finding the Make-Up form.

4.     No make up classes will be permitted during the last two weeks of classes. This is generally an important time of culmination for all dance classes, and the presence of additional students can impede the effectiveness of this process. So, if you know you will have an absence during the term, plan ahead to schedule and attend a make-up class.

 

Observing Class Policy

If you are not able to participate during a class period due to illness or injury, you may avoid being counted absent for the day by observing the class and submitting an observation paper. This option may be used once, as two observations equal one absence. Below are guidelines to be followed in completing an observation paper.

  1. Bring pen/paper/laptop with you to the class you plan to observe. You should take detailed notes on the process/progress of the students in class, taking into consideration dance technique, performance and other aspects from class that we are working on and you deem relevant.
  2. You should reflect upon your individual class process and submit a one-page paper comparing/contrasting your process with that of the other students in class.
  3. The observation paper must be submitted prior to the beginning of the next class period to avoid receiving an absence for the observed class.
  4. Please follow the Written Assignment Submission Guidelines for this course.

 

Written Assignment Submission Guidelines:

o   General:

o   Unless otherwise specified, all written assignments should be completed in Microsoft Word, typed, double-spaced and checked for correct grammar and spelling. The electronic assignment file should follow the correct naming scheme specified below.

o   Naming Scheme for the Electronic File:

o   You are asked to submit your electronic assignment documents with a very specific naming scheme. This process is in place to assist with efficient file management of your assignments.

o   Any assignments failing to follow the correct naming scheme must be corrected and resubmitted. This may result in a late assignment, which will result in a 50% reduction in grade.

o   Submit all your written assignment files for this class using the following naming scheme:

                                      á     YourLastName_FirstInitialOfYourFirstName_AssignmentName_CourseNumberAndSection.docx (make sure you include the suffix '.doc' or '.docx' depending upon the version of Microsoft Word you are using).

                                      á     For example, I would save my assignment files for Modern I, section Z (dance-111z) with the following names:

                                      á     Observation Paper: roberts-a-observepaper-dance-111z.docx

                                      á     Performance Impressions Poem: roberts-a-impressions-dance-111z.docx

o   Additional Requirements for All Written Assignments:

o   Include in your written paper:

o   Your first and last names.

o   The name and section of the course in which you are enrolled.

o   The name/title of the assignment.

o   Papers should address the requirements of the assignment thoughtfully and concisely, and there is no required number of pages for written assignments.

o   Assignment Submission:

o   Submit your assignment by sending it as an email attachment with the subject line containing only the assignment filename.

o   Late assignments:

o   1 day late will receive only 50% credit.

o   2-3 days late will receive only 25% credit.

o   Over 3 days late will receive zero credit.

 

Academic Integrity

St. Olaf College's Honor System Policy applies to tests, quizzes and examinations, whether in-class, take-home, or on-line.

St. Olaf College's Academic Integrity Policy applies to all other work, including papers, posters, research, internships, lab work, etc.

 

Accessibility/Disability Services

If you have a documented disability for which accommodations may be required in this class, please contact Connie Ford (ford@stolaf.edu) or Erin Bang (bang@stolaf.edu) in the Academic Support Center (507-786-3288, Buntrock 108) as soon as possible to discuss accommodations.  If you have already arranged accommodations through Student Accessibility Services, please provide me with your accommodation letter within the first two weeks of class.  Accommodations will only be provided after the letter is submitted to me and with sufficient lead-time for me to arrange testing or other accommodations. For more information: http://www.stolaf.edu/services/asc/sds.html.

 

ASSESSMENT

Grading Systems

In determining your final grade for this course, the following factors are taken into consideration:

 

Additionally, the following grading system is taken into consideration in this course:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

.25 Course Graded Percentages

.50 Course Graded Percentages

á      Demonstrated Quality of Effort: 25%

á      Demonstrated Growth: 25%

á      Demonstrated Level of Ability: 50%

 

á      Demonstrated Quality of Effort: 25%

á      Demonstrated Growth: 25%

á      Demonstrated Level of Ability: 25%

á      Independent Dance Technique Project/ Visual Poetry 'Impressions' Activity: 25%

Demonstrated Quality of Effort:

Demonstrated Growth:

Demonstrated Level of Ability:

 

IMPORTANT DATES TO REMEMBER: (subject to change, in which case students will be notified)

 

GEC ATTRIBUTES: This course is intended to satisfy the SPM (Studies in Physical/Human Movement) and ALS-A (Artistic and Literary Studies - Artistic) General Education Requirements.

 

SPM - Intended learning outcomes for students:

Students will demonstrate:

1. The ability to successfully perform a range of skills connected to a given physical technique;

2. Knowledge of the bodyÕs structure, function, and expression specifically in the performance of a given physical technique and broadly in creating long-term well being;

3. Awareness of their own feelings, values, and attitudes regarding movement and long-term well being; and

4. Awareness of the historical and cultural background of a given physical technique.

SPM - Guidelines for courses:

1. Courses must introduce and develop a physical technique by engaging students in physical movement.

2. Courses must include a cognitive component where students learn about moving.

3. Courses must provide information about lifelong health and wellness of the whole person.

4. Courses must provide historical and cultural background relevant to the activity, illustrating the wide range of roles of physical activity in human development.

 

ALS-A  - Intended learning outcomes for students:

Students will demonstrate:

1.     The ability to identify, analyze, and evaluate the formal properties of a primary work of art.

2.     An understanding of the relationship between a work of art and its cultural context.

ALS-A  - Guidelines for courses:

  1. Artistic forms include the visual and performing arts--visual art, film, music, theater, and dance.
  2. Courses must help students achieve an informed appreciation of the aesthetic and formal properties of the art that is the subject of the course, and an understanding of the art within the broader context of human life and culture.
  3. Courses may develop appreciation and understanding through performance, creation or criticism:

(a) Performance includes acting in plays, or performing musical compositions or choreographed dances.

(b) Creation is the making of new works, in the studio arts, film, music, theater or dance.

(c) Criticism is the analysis of artistic forms.

  1. Fractional courses totaling one course may satisfy this requirement if:

(a) All courses are in the same artistic form

(b) The combination of fractional courses as a whole satisfies the guidelines above.

 

SYLLABUS CREDITS: Over the years, a number of dance artists and institutions have contributed to and helped shape my philosophy of and approach to teaching dance technique. I'd like to especially thank the following individuals and institutions for their invaluable input, guidance, support and generosity in sharing their artistry, philosophies and permission to use some of their ideas in developing my courses.

 

  • St. Olaf College
    • Janice Roberts
    • Sherry Saterstrom
    • Heather Klopchin
    • Anne von Bibra
    • Ann Wagner
  • Dance Center of Columbia College in Chicago
    • Jan Erkert
  • Arizona State University
    • Ann Ludwig
    • Pamela Matt
  • Gustavus Adolphus College
    • Michele Rusinko
  • Repertory Dance Theatre
    • Linda C. Smith
    • Ford Evans
  • University of Utah
    • Barbara Hamblin
    • Yi-Qi Cheng
    • Li-Chou Cheng
    • BenŽ Arnold
    • Abby Fiat
  • University of Oklahoma
    • Mary Margaret Holt
    • Miguel Terekhov
  • East Tennessee State University
    • Judith Woodruff

 

 


 

MODERN DANCE ACTIVITY/ASSIGNMENT INFORMATION:

 

Modern Dance History Video Day

Modern Dance History Video Day: There will be one class period dedicated to viewing a modern dance history video to gain insight on one or more of the dance artists who were catalysts for its development and evolution.

The exact date will be announced later.

During the class period following the video viewing, you will have group conversations using the historical content as a jumping off point, and in consideration of the questions below.

 

Questions to Consider Prior to Viewing

  1. At this point in your life and as you begin or continue your training in modern dance via this course, what information introduced in the video was interesting or meaningful to you and why?
  2. Describe a situation in which you were called upon or compelled to be a 'pioneer' (an originator who helps open up a new line of thought or activity or a new method, etc.).
  3. Artists have been known to be "ahead of their time", suffering the fate of being unappreciated during their lifetime, while achieving high regard postmortem. Take a few minutes to ponder an artist of any age that you like and believe is or was under appreciated. Name the artist and tell us why you like her/him.

Video Viewing

 

Dance-210 (.50 credit) Only Assignments

1) Modern Dance Performance Impressions Poem Assignment
Due one week after viewing the modern dance concert.
(Tuesday, 12/11 is the final day Visual/Concrete poems will be accepted. Poems must be submitted within one week of the concert date.)

¤  Your full name

¤  Class name: Modern Dance II

¤  Title of specific piece/s, including choreographer/s (if your poem is on a single piece or two)

¤  Title of Concert (if your poem is on the entire concert)

¤  If you are writing about specific pieces, please include the names of the pieces and the choreographers.

¤  Date & Location of Concert

¤  Why you believe the various elements of your poem (text, images, colors, line, etc.) contribute to the meaning or content of your poem.

á       NAMING SCHEME FOR VISUAL/CONCRETE POEM ASSIGNMENT FILE

o   YourLastName_FirstInitialOfYourFirstName_Impressions_CourseNumberAndSection.jpg (or .gif, or .png, or other suffix depending upon the specific program with which you create your visual poem).VISUAL/CONCRETE POEM RESOURCES

o   Visual/Concrete poetry: the typeface and arrangement of text, images, etc. upon the page can be as important as the words themselves in conveying a message or effect.

o   An article on Visual Poetry with examples at the end may be found at: http://www.poetryfoundation.org/poetrymagazine/article/182397. Feel free to research other online sites.

o   A Brief Guide to Concrete Poetry from the Academy of American Poets: http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/5649

o   The Sackner Archive of Concrete and Visual Poetry: http://ww2.rediscov.com/sacknerarchives/browsecollections.aspx


2) Dance-210 Independent Dance Technique Project Assignment
You are expected to design and engage in a research activity in consultation with me. The specific objective of the research activity is to deepen and broaden your individual process, inquiry and exploration of dance technique in the context of this course.

Research examples might involve:

The research you pursue will result in:

For your project to be successful, it must examine and synthesize historical, social, cultural, political, as well as artistic influences, again within the context of this course. You are required to schedule 2 separate meetings with me during the term to discuss the process and progress of your dance technique project.

*The audio/visual media may include vhs/dvd videos played via the studio audio/video equipment, the department portable media cart (if available) or your personal computer. You may also consider using a PowerPoint presentation to organize your thoughts and material. If you plan to use your personal computer, you must check out a projector and all necessary cables from IIT (plan and practice with the technology in advance, so that you have enough time to consult with IIT (helpdesk) and make necessary adjustments if you need assistance with the technology.

Preliminary Discussion Preparation:

  1. Near the beginning of the term, you will select a movement intensive dance topic that interests you, and you will engage in preliminary research on that topic.
  2. You will submit via this Google doc your dance discussion topic along with a rationale for selecting this topic, and a preliminary annotated bibliography (MLA style) of three evaluated sources. You may be asked to revise your topic.
  3. You will then begin to conduct more extensive, in depth research of the dance topic and compile a more extensive corresponding annotated bibliography (MLA style). You should indicate the category that each of your resources falls under and why (what makes this resource ÔprimaryÕ, for example).
  4. You must consult with a reference librarian at Rolvaag Memorial Library and Beth Christensen at Halvorson Music Library to assist you in locating, retrieving and utilizing the most appropriate, effective sources for your discussion. The research sources for your discussion should include:
  5. New Resource: You must work with the St. Olaf Speaking Center: See Google Doc at: https://docs.google.com/a/stolaf.edu/document/d/1mgtGMp4WbPbqWfFKYMMEPXBjkHXLVvfe5W4I5VqQCEE/edit

Within one week of your Presentation Day:

  1. You will test your presentation using the technology cart stored in the faculty prep studio. You will need to arrange with me or another dance faculty to gain access to the technology cart, so plan ahead to make sure your test run is successful.

Day of Presentation:

  1. You will introduce the topic of your discussion by briefly providing background information on your dance discussion topic. Preparing responses to the following questions will assist you in your preparation:
    1. Why is this topic of interest and/or relevant to you as a student dancer?
    2. What is the historical timeline and significance of this topic, and what is the current standing and/or relevance of this topic to the dance field?
    3. Who are some of the leading figures, and what are some of the dominant factors in shaping the path and relevance of the dance topic?
  2. You will submit a hard copy of your presentation outline and your annotated bibliography to the instructor.
  3. You will also submit via email an electronic copy of your presentation outline, your annotated bibliography, and PowerPoint presentation (if applicable) if file size permits.

Evaluation Criteria:

  1. Preparation: Was your presentation topic and bibliography submitted and on time? Did you appear to be adequately prepared to lead the presentation?
  2. Research: Did you utilize the library staff in the pursuit of your resources. Did you utilize the appropriate category and number of resources?
  3. Content: Did you provide contextual information as an introduction of your dance topic? Was the relevant information on your topic given during your discussion?
  4. Delivery: Did you clearly deliver and moderate your discussion? How were the speed, volume, and confidence during the oral presentation of your discussion?
  5. Fostering discussion: Did your presentation generate interest, questions and discussion amongst the class?
  6. Outline and Bibliography: Was the outline coherent and relevant to the discussion, and was the bibliography complete and relevant to the discussion. Were both the outline and bibliography appropriately submitted?